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The Pedestal (Free verse) by Richard

I don’t even know your name, But that mystery only deepens my intrigue. I would like to say that I am content, Just to know that you exist. Life is full of sadness and empty of remorse, It gives and takes indiscriminately. But every so often it smiles upon us, And in that radiant glow, we are found fortunate. It is enough for me to bask in the light of your smile, And drown in the depths of your eyes.

zodiac 19-Mar-04/7:59 PM
If I understand this comment right, then you don't believe it is possible to write anything that can be considered poetric except by stringing together meaningless cliches. Have you any idea what a pox-bearing turd-ball of a notion that is?




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