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ReplyTo a comment on The Pedestal by Richard.

Richard19 Mar 2004

This is the revision for Mr. Google Cliché (zodia):

The Pedestal:
You’re Jane Doe, so what
You’re here, great
Life sucks when you’re not lucky
Please look at me and smile.

WOW! That’s art! But it still needs some revision:

The Pedestal: You exist, Life Sucks, so smile

Not quite there:

The Pedestal: You and Life Suck, so smile

Ah Ha! I’ve got it!

The Pedestal: You suck and smile!

THAT’S IT! Thank you so much for your insightful comments! I can surely win the Pulitzer Prize for this one!