Richard19 Mar 2004
This is the revision for Mr. Google Cliché (zodia):
The Pedestal:
Youâre Jane Doe, so what
Youâre here, great
Life sucks when youâre not lucky
Please look at me and smile.
WOW! Thatâs art! But it still needs some revision:
The Pedestal: You exist, Life Sucks, so smile
Not quite there:
The Pedestal: You and Life Suck, so smile
Ah Ha! Iâve got it!
The Pedestal: You suck and smile!
THATâS IT! Thank you so much for your insightful comments! I can surely win the Pulitzer Prize for this one!