SupremeDreamer11 Mar 2004

Your use of plain english in your work has alot of odd curiosities. Many times I've stumbled over scattered irregularities in grammar and sentence structure when reading some of your work- and it sure doesn't come across as poetic wordplay. I'm not one to act superior, I have my own querks in my use of the english language, even though I've greatly improved during my time at rankerville-- But you don't seem to pick up on your writing querks as far as I can tell.

As for you being dim-witted? Narrow minded is more like it, but whatever. You have your moments, and other times it seems that you don't really think before speaking. At times your pretty edgy and sensitive to harsh criticism or opinions.. you certainly never reacted well to any of the parodies I've written concerning a few pieces of yours.