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Brethren (Free verse) by richa

The trick of the dandelion clock: To disperse in the wind, grey seeds to interchange like girls, plain as a sugar's beet, that dance, each hiding a Newton.

Shuushin 11-Mar-04/7:06 AM
but doesn't the word "brethren" indicate brotherhood [with a solemn or religious tone]?

I very much like the sounds this makes, but the logic eludes me. Still not getting the Sir Newton angle.




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