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Unfinished (Lyric) by Blake

If only I might view passion rejoined Or merest sign, to lift me from abyss But peace I only find in verses coined Whilst poetic desire suffices for a kiss; Still, let this serve not to shackle you to me I intend to rise through lyric, joyously For, as such work, my sorrow cannot remain When the very caress of a hand frees the chain.

pitchblackdisaster 16-Aug-02/11:51 AM
shear brilliance.
this poem really grabbed my heart and i suppose you are a romantic man and im sure it is not just old farts that like your work i am probbably one of the youngest people on poemranker and i like your work alot and im sure it means allot to you and doesnt desserve to be dissed as it has been from what i have read.




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