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A Dutch Peasant (Free verse) by richa

Not all folded roads come up as mountains, not here in the lowlands marshland sinks and we can't see the rock faces bend like a spider to topple down valleys.

zodiac 4-Mar-04/1:44 PM
Great, as ever - though a little obviously a haiku (to me; maybe no one else will notice.) How important is it for you to stick to haiku form? Also, you're missing a semicolon (!) or period after lowlands.




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