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Purgatory of Consciousness (Free verse) by crims0ngh0st

Beauty lies in my cold blue eyes Deep somewhere inside Look too hard you might fall in My vast open mind My heart longs for the touch of compassion For the piercing complexities of understanding Thoughtfulness astounds me Empathy reveals me The tightly wound darkness welcomes me My thoughts linger in the night Waiting for the dawn to enlighten me Drifting through time and space Lurking beyond infinity.

poetandknowit 16-Aug-02/10:10 AM
tightly wound darkness - nice
rest of poem - not nice.




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