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Pop the Pill (Free verse) by etherealmaiden

Headache, heartache Heartache, headache How can I make them dissolve? Pop the pill Pop one more Pop one just for my heart The drugs take effect But the pain is still there It just won't go away So I pop the pill Do it again Take them just for fun The headache stops My vision clouds But the hand keeps moving Pop, pop, pop I'm drowning in drugs But the wound is still open And the pills keep coming Pop one Pop another Pop two at once All feeling gone But tears are falling Pain pressed to the extreme Pop three pills Tip the bottle over No more pills to pop My reality's blurred But not the pain As the bottle tumbles down Blackness

etherealmaiden 2-Mar-04/7:06 PM
I didn't write this poem for others... it was just a way to release the guilt that was scrammbling in my head about something that i did to myself although it didn't reach this extreme. Sorry but your comment just made me mad because you don't know what my life is really like, but i'll accept that criticism. thanks for the input.




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