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Timmy (Lyric) by richa

The grave digger does not talk, but digs his small part of the churchyard. Like a trapped mole, he re-turns sods spade in hand and art growing sharper as the sounds not fitting to music filter out, like peel down a plughole. The grave digger does not talk, but digs his small part of the churchyard. Like a trapped mole.

Shuushin 2-Mar-04/10:18 AM
sod[s]?

I like the cadence of this very much - for me it's the subtle rhyme with talk/part, which was worth repeating.

But what is it with Tims and holes?

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