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solace (Free verse) by crin

i'm in such a bad mood i want you to soothe me i feel like a beast out of control out of my head i want you in bed underneath the sheets with me holding on tightly hold me tightly that's all i desire all i need

poetandknowit 16-Aug-02/8:13 AM
If you would have actually used images to convey this, you might have something resembling a poem. Unfortunately, you did do that. You told us everything and did not show us a thing.




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