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Nocturnal Emissions (Free verse) by EAger to Offend

Ruined by the mundane day By it’s “wake, work, and get paid” By the blasé art of commerce A sterile compost -the city. Starving for solitude In the darkest a.m. panic These eyes stay wide To deny the nightmare congestion Imprinted under-lid. Eager to offend I lick my plate And meditate On my home-made mandala Wallpaper.

smlink84 29-Feb-04/6:19 PM
although the illustrations are very interesting, I lost you at the last paragraph...but then again maybe I didn't...haha..




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