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Sawdust (Free verse) by New Life Drug

The Red Mark, its changing And its fading who we are The Red Mark, its coming and we dont know who we are We take the Red Mark, every morning we take it everyday We're happy because of the Red Mark We take it again and we're happy for another day The Red Mark helps us from not jumping off the bridge and its taking who we used to be The Red Mark, its fading me because the world is left with simple smiles We are so happy, and its so haunting The Red Mark made me who I am today And the Red Mark makes us so sheltered because we cover the darkness and take away the pain Now the world is so happy, we're so social now we are Thank you Red Mark for all these happy faces, and these happy places, we' ve come so far We are lost, and we don't know it, in our brains we take away the hell. Because we're mental, mental with sadness Thank you Red Mark for making it all seem so well I love you final sanity I love you simple solution I love you. Lift me from dispair Red Mark where would I be if you weren't there Can we ask ourselves "where would we be if you weren't there?" Hey everybody tell me where would we be if it wasn't there. Now I can't come, but thats okay. We all need children to stay away from the hay anyway.

New Life Drug 15-Aug-02/9:15 PM
gee, thanks! (sarcasm)




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