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Darkness (Free verse) by KathrynR

He creeps into my room at night Darkness is a friend to pencils in my pencil case He hides in my tray at school He's lurking under my bed at night ready to pounce Silently he surrounds me His favourite game is to hide in my notepads ready to scare me out of my wits He creeps in the cups and saucers ready to scream 'Boo' Darkness is moons best friend He sleeps under my eye sockets; eyelashes as his quilt Darkness' worst enemy is lightness

==Doylum 15-Aug-02/5:14 PM
No -=Jo90=- i do not suggest she reads your poems, I would caution her about a great deal on this site,i simply suggest that by commenting on her poem and then saying don't look at my poem she will/won't do exactly what your official or was that unoffical persona said not to do not.




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