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A Dream (Free verse) by DarkThirteens

Now it is night. I can see the stars. The moon shines down on my face. I'm now illuminated, pale enough to be a spirit. My black hair adds to the white. I must be the forest spirit I always dream of. The green splash in my eyes indicates foliage. Hollow but full. Sleep till morning. Drifting then Gone.

DarkThirteens 23-Feb-04/6:53 PM
Thanks Horus! lol
I capitalized Gone because I thought it would put more of a punch on the ending? I'm just beginning and trying new things. I'm open to ideas.




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