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A Dream (Free verse) by DarkThirteens

Now it is night. I can see the stars. The moon shines down on my face. I'm now illuminated, pale enough to be a spirit. My black hair adds to the white. I must be the forest spirit I always dream of. The green splash in my eyes indicates foliage. Hollow but full. Sleep till morning. Drifting then Gone.

richa 22-Feb-04/11:32 AM
The comment was in response to a mispelled comment by devina. I can't see any obvious mispelling in your piece.

Gone -- why is it capitalised.




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