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The Commanding Disobedince of Words (Free verse) by daggatolar

And language, disagrees But with no feet to mount a calvary Crusading against us . We cross To bless our instrument of sin A load full of nails to hammer The other load of poison litany We are free from sin The commanding disobediance Of words To death on the cross We crossed A peculiar and unseen type of speaking A sin

richa 22-Feb-04/5:10 AM
instrument of sin? coyly CLS




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