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The daisy-chain girl (Free verse) by richa

The length of a daisy chain is no measure, we are not in ancient rome, one must do like us to live in the orchard-- 'shake the low branches till apples are dropped and buckets are full and stalks are to be re-hung with new fruit' 'or one's knotted daisies'.

Shuushin 17-Feb-04/7:56 PM
You make me work so hard with your poetry.

I understand dandelions and litter (putting a flowerpot over them for extended cultivation).

and I can *almost* see your connections with the measure, the clock, the stepping; these incremental units.

They are, supposedly, linked somehow. You say "spriritual vs mathematic" - have you been reading Spinoza before bedtime again??? Maybe some Tipler?




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