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Remembering Joy (Free verse) by ifni

it was darkness, and then joy as hope entwined my soul it was the dawning, remembering my mind, stretching oh, yes, I have one - a mind and thoughts to think with it words to spill from it like sweet fire, running from my fingertips I, the creative joy.

anonymous 5-Apr-02/4:38 PM
Isn't it a little eyes to just throw together random words? There were a couple things that matched up however; "sweet fire" wouldn't have thought about its taste before. good one.




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