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The daisy-chain girl (Free verse) by richa

The length of a daisy chain is no measure, we are not in ancient rome, one must do like us to live in the orchard-- 'shake the low branches till apples are dropped and buckets are full and stalks are to be re-hung with new fruit' 'or one's knotted daisies'.

richa 17-Feb-04/1:41 PM
Put an extra verse as the poem did not state the girl was making daisy chains on the grass, still.

'we are not in ancient rome' 'with chains and feet'? (two roman measures).




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