poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Song of departure by kawakurdi.

poetandknowit14 Aug 2002

I know what act/theme is going on here, but the metaphors are basic and not even good clich??s. Come on: "This is the spring of your winter season". "Cuts down the green tree of my lifetime." The stuff has been worked so hard so many times, it now sounds like it belongs on a soap opera.