poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Gone Wrong by XpunkXgirlX.

lastobelus16 Feb 2004

Jesus christ it must be difficult to walk down the street of a typical american city these days what with all the debris from exploding/shattered teen hearts, the corpses littering the sidewalks of kids who just couldn't handle their life of never being hungry and having the best medical care, schooling, clothing, & toys in the history of mankind.

Whine whine whine whine whine whine whine. You are no punk. You're a fucking whiner.

There's another 16 year old on here who actually knows how to write. She's called Fear of Garbage. Maybe she's 17 now.

Look her up: THAT's poetry.

This is not poetry. It's whining.