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ReplyTo a comment on Triptych: Rural by lastobelus.

lastobelus15 Feb 2004

...uncles lean on cars, their beer
takes away the sting.

-- might actually be better, in terms of the main meaning. Good edit.

However, uncles leaning on THEIR cars is a very personal image for me -- the family reunions at my grandma's house with my father's 13 surviving siblings, their spouses, and a bazillion cousins. So ima gonna hafta leave this one the way she be.