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Insomnia (Haiku) by dreamsdiefirst

Going for the sleep, Wish could beat this insomnia, While counting the sheep!

Shuushin 15-Feb-04/2:39 PM
five seven then five
do you need an abucus?
I counted this thrice.

actually, you can play with the syllable count - I just like posting that when I get the chance.

;o)

Did you do it on purpose? If so, why not just stick the other syllable ("I") in there?

With "in som ni a" you are basically halfway there; that's a tough one.




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