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Taller Girl (Free verse) by lastobelus

Taller Girl whirled her skirt in segregated circles, drawing boundaries around her with it with her hair twirled out in black circles and her arms flung out that skirt coming up.up. towards them, wooshing out and drawing her space unusually wide as she was unusually tall as if she would somehow.turtle.down in it. 1.one drum and a guitar and then another and under.guitar.drum.thunder. her circling hair, her face comes cover comes turning under that silk flung black.Once.coming around and the hair flying up (I saw) turtled brows and closed blacklined eyes, mouth turned down in (studied) Oblivion.but the other.drum.come- ing around had an opened eye, (the) red lips turning up under the flying glimpse of hair so I saw that she saw that I saw her.drum. Then went whirling away into the center .drum.thump.un.til I saw only the tips of her hair flying over the heads of.all.the.(drum).others and heard her stamping boots.

albert 9-Feb-04/1:15 PM
I don't believe in segregation. I couldn't finish it.




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