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the doorman (Free verse) by nessness

gray eyes lend indifference to the world. red coat with gold trim doesn' t match his stony face. the people come and go all so different they become individual drops in one vast sea alike-- the beautiful the matronly the human race. all leave their keys at the door and once in a while remember to express gratitude to the doorman.

Tarquin De La Bog 13-Aug-02/6:03 PM
I quite like this, but there's not enough. 6. I'd just got into it, and it ended. Write more next time; I'd like to see what you have to say for yourself in a longer piece.




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