zodiac8 Feb 2004

re: "-- not sure if i get this..." Maybe:
My head is ringing, I
Smell guncotton. My shoulder aches and I say
Aiming.... Or some variation of that. (This, by the way, is not the variation you want. Just an idea.)

You could just say "And pay for the shooting with _____, which makes me go..." And think of a really crazy word for ___.

What kind of stuff gets praised on eratosphere? Is any of it here? I'm interested in how their taste differs from the rancor. I mean, I've been looking at NanceXToo's discussion group and thinking they're all so serious and blah. You have to put up with a lot of crap here, but you won't get bored reading tidy grown-up poems. And I think you can post stuff that's here a little less... polished. Stuff you actually want help on, maybe.