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she is... (Free verse) by Sapphire

of earth and spice, had carried in on wind crisp of air and orbs, sky blue tinged apple cheeks with flesh begging to be bitten flamed ropes falling over shoulders, i'm smitten

anonymous 4-Apr-02/1:15 PM
you have a decent lexicon..... of images and scents and experiences...you should keep writing. Just keep it real. Close to the earth. Write poems like you're driving a tank....!




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