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melancholy: (Free verse) by Sapphire

this lingering longing, clutches at me whole the ache of emptiness, gripping upon my soul those languid lazy days of frolick gone that wash of youth, no longer in my song

anonymous 4-Apr-02/1:09 PM
There is a place for despair, I guess. But it stays only your despaire until you can learn get out of yourself and look around. Replace all your I's and Me's with she or you.




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