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power (Free verse) by flatliner

i see you look at me a flurry of emotion clouds my eye and if i thought i'd sit peacefully my heart didn't even try so there was the start it was the day caught by rain we shared a table and my heart the precursor to the pain.

limonade 13-Aug-02/11:29 AM
Good rhythm. Try to put some images in. Poetry should stimulate the senses.




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