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Winged Beauty (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul

In my dreams she inhabits the sky Her presence blinds mortal eyes Her presence warms mortal hearts The sight of her extended white feathered wings, resembles a look from god Every dream I see her Showing me the way to heaven

razorgrin 13-Aug-02/10:58 AM
Yes, though this needs polishing, it's good deep down. Don't worry about "poetandknowit", he's a pompous, pretentious bastard who seems to have deemed himself the most knowing and mature "poet" on the site, and therefore it's his job to ensure creeping postmodernism and to keep all the comments on topic. He is,in short, a wannabe dictator, poorly endowed and lacking in social skills.




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