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Day of Reckoning (Free verse) by Lenore

Like a sickly sweet smell from the depths of hell; your vision in my mind implores me, to fashion a death so vile and base, no mercy or peace can find thee. A villanous state my thoughts in dwell; enraged by your indignant apathy. How well you disquise your selfish intent, while the stench of your truth proves brashly. The blatent deceit in which you repeat, those ghastly yet savvy deeds; ignite me to smite thee, though no perilous warning impedes. Onward in lashing! Pure rage in the bashing! Your terror reign, incomplete! Cut down from your thrown and left all alone, to lie bleeding and wrought with defeat.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-Aug-02/4:46 AM
a) I just did tell you what I really think. b) Your opinion of me is completely determined by the fact that I disagreed with horus8's over the top praise of your poem, so it's bull shit. People like you are what make the world such a frustrating place. You can't seem to make any distinction between whining and 'negative' comments in general. The world of opinions is divided up in two in your mind: 'whining' and 'positive comments'. Whining is what mean, bitter, unsatisfied people do, whereas positive comments are made by bright, smiling, cool, happy people. Presumably you would rather people just express nice, supportive thoughts and emotions, because then we would all feel good about ourselves! c) It's a sign of a great poet that he reacts to anti-praise of his poetry with an ad hominem attack.




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