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Winged Beauty (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul

In my dreams she inhabits the sky Her presence blinds mortal eyes Her presence warms mortal hearts The sight of her extended white feathered wings, resembles a look from god Every dream I see her Showing me the way to heaven

poetandknowit 12-Aug-02/9:31 PM
you must have incredibly boring dreams seeing the same crap in each one. I must say young fellow you are the better of the gaggle of giggling adolescents that are taking up space from the real poets (five or six) on this site and that is not a compliment. anywho, hopefully college will give you a bit of experience and make these things you call lyrics and poems more interesting.




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