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Beauty Sleep (Free verse) by Billy Biff-Chin

No need for Beauty Sleep Never will you look like a creep Just stay here with me And I will help blind anything people may not want to see But there is no need for that Nothing will make you ugly in my eyes , for a fact So stay with me And I will let you see That Beauty is not an object - To Me...

Fraser Allonby Q.C. 4-Feb-04/3:30 AM
I'm shaking my head in disbelief! This is appalling! "Never will you look like a creep"! You must be joking. This is terrible! -0-




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