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Am I (Free verse) by mozac

Am I a lover Do I love Do i know... Love I am love or am I not Do I exist Do I feel That which I must am I hollow or a broken door are my eyes tearless without humility unfeeling Do I see what my eyes hear or ignore my beating heart Do I remeber a black stone a Heart uncarved I am an ocean and yet I am a drop of a tearless tear of unmoving movement Give me just give me one second of love so that I may breathe My heart cries drowns in an ocean of tears without waves silent waiting only waiting such a patience unrequired Beloved you kill me you give me death every moment I do not remember... Love Can i choose to be without you to be without me I love you slowly without words my eyes are dry My heart is melting how do I sleep in these dreams Beloved let me die so that I may awaken without me

horus8 12-Aug-02/11:32 AM
this is the javelin that will kill d.a, the i ching of badda bing, let me guess..you gave yourself the seven to set the mode..right? who cares.. the poem is so balanced that it never moves..you could say all of this with a phrase or a word "taoistic-stagnation". it just never moves for the love of a mutilated jehova witness.. help me help you. tow it to a garage for repairs..i will pick up the tab. for i am as rich as a pauper, as thick as an unlit wick see how fun..this could go on forever, but it wont....




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