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My Hidden Love for You (Free verse) by Kriss

When you are not there, you are hard to see. Absent from my life, but still in time somewhere to be found. Your absence from my life may last a minute or an eternity, but always will you be there. The unspoken words are hard to hear, but deep down inside my heart longs for you. My feelings are strong but subtle. Compare it to the words that are hidden in the wind, my love for you may be hard to find but forever more, I know it is there. Someday in this life time, we shall meet and stumble upon the greatest feelings, of sincere long lost love. For in the future we both exist standing next to one another.

Kriss 12-Aug-02/11:04 AM
Thank you so much everything you said made so much sense. I hope to work on some poems in the future and I would love for you to read them. You really seem to know what you are talking about. By the way may I ask of your age? You seem a whole lot wiser then I, this is why I ask. Thanks




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