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Alone Together (Free verse) by lynnkyle

So alone together. His hand slides from mine, his fingers stroke my face. So soft are his lips, so warm is his breath. His hand slides across my cheek, his eyes search mine. We are together, we are together in this moment. Together in the night, the night of mist and coolness. Do we feel cool? We feel warm, we feel hot. We feel together. Stroking, sliding, surrounded, swallowed by the night mist. Alone together. I speak, I say Should we, he says We should. He says Yes and I say Yes and we say yesses and yesses. So that's how it goes, how it is. In the mist, in the night, alone together. Softly, sweetly, hotly in the cool night, yes. After, he says We did, Did we. And I say Yes and I smile. He smiles too. He says, stroking my face, he says Again. Yes I say, Again yes, and again, alone together, we say Yes.

andrewjthomas 30-Jan-04/11:40 AM
i really enjoyed how you describe around the topic
beating around the bush with artistry : )




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