annabellee29 Jan 2004

Thanks. It was good to see someone recognize this.
I’m not sure Tennyson would approve. Although, I like to imagine he would at least commend the effort. Imitation is after all the highest form of flattery and in this case, brought inspiration to a word-weary poet. I like the changes you made to yours. I’m sure I’m nit picking but I’m still not satisfied with <we be> it is better though. I’m not familiar with the poem you mention. I’ll see if I can find it.