lastobelus29 Jan 2004

I stole the two unders from myself! (Taller Girl)

I hesitated to use BMW, then opted for verisimilitude. All taxis in Germany are BMW's. I originally had "The pale car..", maybe I'll go back to that.

on the path is probably better, I will take that advice.

you don't like black night of the sky is moving to indigo?!! Damn. I will think about that, maybe I can find something better.

Question: do you think his made up dream for her is cheesy enough, or should it be cheesier, to make the point more? and is it clear that when he's imagining her face in the sand he starts to see her as a giant octopus, or should I just say it?