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I don't fit in (Free verse) by devina

I'm so deppresed, don't know what to do. I feel so alone, I wish I knew. Where everyone is, what everyone do. I miss my friends, I wish they knew. I don't fit in here, in this new place. In my heart it's an empty space. I made some choices in my life, I made a lot of mistakes. But do I have to pay for them forever? And now I'm sitting here, in this whole new place. I don't fit in, I'm all alone. Will it be like this forever? I wish I knew. I hate this place, it's a whole knew space. I just don't fit in.

lastobelus 29-Jan-04/10:39 AM
You can write what you want. Readers can say what they want. Why should the freedom go only one way?

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There are other online poetry forums where, if you posted this particular piece of shite, they wouldn't say anything at all, they would simply delete your post and your account.




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