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For my darling Lori (Free verse) by Twisted Wizard

For My Darling Lori The sun does not rise upon the horizon in the skies Nor does it set without your lovely face fixing my eyes. Time lays its burden while you are away, More and more do I miss you each passing day. The ocean waves do not crash or miss a beat, In the incredible moment you stand at my feet. The wind it howls late in the dead of night, Without you to ponder, I fall into fright. You are the epitome of my desire, You light up my life like a blazing fire. You're everything I've searched for and more, I love you now and will do so forevermore. If you are in need, do not dispair, Just call my name and I will be there. I love you

Twisted Wizard 10-Aug-02/2:31 PM
go to hell and fuckin die. Your writing is the epitome of shit if you havent noticed. You wanna know why i dont write about jesus? I would much rather read about him and tell others about him than just simply write about him.




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