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A Moment (Haiku) by nentwined

With these lines I do entwine you, your mind, a moment in time: velvet wine.

anonymous 16-Oct-01/1:27 AM
pretty, but you SIN! it's 783- a haiku is 575. you question the gospels, eh? :)




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