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Are You O.K.? (Free verse) by sonawrote

No one ever asked me .... what's wrong they just go on ... to make the assumption consumption .... of every day life that's what's wrong ... what do you say make up excuses ... of all their uses our consumption ... of everyday life does it really matter ... what they say are you okay??? ... today answer me ... without delay i don't want to ... make the assumption of what everyone says .... or fall into consumption of every day life hey, hey, Are you okay??

zodiac 27-Jan-04/7:04 PM
No. Poetic license is when writers who are already immensely famous (usually for no particular reason) do annoying things that people who don't know better have to respect. We, the drudges in the black coal-mines of poetry, are not entitled to it. When we try, they tell us we're just amateurish.




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