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Are You O.K.? (Free verse) by sonawrote

No one ever asked me .... what's wrong they just go on ... to make the assumption consumption .... of every day life that's what's wrong ... what do you say make up excuses ... of all their uses our consumption ... of everyday life does it really matter ... what they say are you okay??? ... today answer me ... without delay i don't want to ... make the assumption of what everyone says .... or fall into consumption of every day life hey, hey, Are you okay??

Blindpoetry 27-Jan-04/6:54 PM
nothing against what you say (as some stuff people reply to creates arguments, I've learned) ...but wouldn't that just be called a "poetic license"?

...but I'm kind of new to poetry terms right now... so correct me if I'm wrong.




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