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I smell coffee (Other) by Princess_Snowflake

I smell a strong smell of coffee floating around the air in here I am craving for coffee with a rich, strong taste I want to drink coffee with anything I want I cannot stop craving until I have a big taste of coffee from the tasty coffee beans It smells like pure Colombian and Arabica or espresso I smell coffee around here and want a big taste of it I want the taste in my mouth that would keep me asking for more and more I cannot smile without any coffee until I taste it I cannot be awake until I taste the coffee Why can't I have some? Why can't I crave for coffee? Why can't I pour myself some hot, delecious coffee in the morning? I smell coffee everyday and feel the taste in my tongue.

middenHeap 27-Jan-04/5:26 PM
Poetry is supposed to evoke strong internal images. And this pome evoked a very strong internal image in me as I read it, of Princess_Snowflake with, er, something in her mouth. Therefore I must conclude that it is excellent poetry indeed.




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