poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Drying, Cracked Roots by AnotherNothing.

Shuushin27 Jan 2004

I like that it is a non-typical angle on the life of a tree; futility rather than growth and life (the same thing, perhaps).

What about changing the last "trees" to a specific kind of trees? Don't do willow - too "done".

Alternatively, maybe a specific *part* of a tree (trunks, roots, branches...).

anyway, I like what you have, more so for the different perspective.