poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Lullaby by Goad.

Goad27 Jan 2004

you are correct, small d and &'s serve no purpose, and are just laziness. The pouch and daddy belong together, part of the idea is that daddy did come up with a diamond ring at one point, but it is long gone, lost or sold or gambled away.

hmmm, my repetitions were definitely deliberate, but perhaps they don't do what I want them to.