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To Kiss (Free verse) by Jody Conn

A languid kiss on swollen lips A glistening pouting flower This honey- scented hooded bud I savor at any hour Like wonderful wine with flavor divine Such moist and marvelous bliss All desires and dreams fulfilled This treasure now mine to kiss jc062001

horus8 9-Aug-02/11:50 AM
yoda jr.yoda jr.yoda jr. it would be pointless and slumming in my mind to retort. therefore, i shall instead compliment you on your incredible ability to speak so clearly, so in depth, and all with out a tongue!
(he lost it giving cpr to a seizure stricken fellow Mcdonald's employee) you my friend are a trooper. grunt with pride! sign with joy! your love of your fellow man goes beyond the call of duty. the extra mile. this buds for you. <brought to you by tic-tic the only insecticide breath mint created to date accidentally.>




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