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The Upside-Down Frown (Free verse) by fevriere

The upside-down frown smashed quicker than the pulse Into the bitter-sweetest decay, the hottest grey slide A thorn crown, dragged for curiosity, through the focus of eyes plasticated, buried elsewhere.

zodiac 25-Jan-04/2:02 PM
I retract. I must have been in a bad mood. I agree with Goad though. Try making all those crazy long lines say something.




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