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simple silence (Free verse) by daniella

in a bursting, surrounded by too many words i have let the water run right through. drenched by solemn truths, to quietly dry away what might have remained. forcing it open in a turn, the waves caught me and threw me to the end of another phrase. i could not be warned too soon. and off in the far away sky i can sense a lightening... but i will not offer more.

Goad 23-Jan-04/4:22 PM
well, you certainly squeezed that one dry. You must have been thirsty. That can happen when you go wandering in the arroyos of life. Dry, dry, dry, and then BAM a deluge that leaves you broken and sodden.




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