Goad17 Jan 2004

I like the first three stanza's quite a lot, but the end doesn't cut it.

What are you saying, that the whimsy of a sentient fungus is not just a metaphor and this is a horror poem? Or are you alluding to the effects of poison/hallucinogenic mushrooms -- if so it could be sketched much better.

But you taught me a new word, that's pretty rare, lol.

Nitpick: no need to say great when in the next line you say colossal.